RA 피드백 부탁드립니다 (79+/ 현재 Overall 75, Speaking 50-60)

안녕하세요 79+ 목표로 준비중입니다! 이 사이트가 있어서 얼마나 감사한지 몰라요 자주 글 올려주시는 분들 정말 감사합니다.

스피킹의 문턱에서 항상 걸려넘어지는데요 각 스피킹 파트별로 녹음해서 이곳에 올리고 피드백을 받아보려 합니다.. 일단 RA 인데요 다른 스피킹 파트로 이정도의 발음과 속도, 인토네이션으로 합니다. 고쳐야 할 부분이 있다면 피드백 주시면 감사하겠습니다 ㅠㅠ

p.s 제 성적표도 같이 올려뒀는데 혹시나 해서... 어떤 파트에서 점수가 많이 깎인건지 알 수 있는 방법이 있을까요?

녹음 할때 쓴 문제들입니다. 다른 분들이 올려주신 자료로 해봤어요 샘플도 들어볼겸!

(1) Free trade is an economic policy under which the government does not interfere with trade. No tariffs are applied to imports or exports, and people are allowed to trade goods and services as they please. Supply and demand dictates the prices for which goods and services sell and are the only factors that determine how resources are allocated in society.


(2) Global warming is defined as an increase in the average temperature of the earth's atmosphere. This trend began in the middle of the 20th century and is one of the major environmental concerns of scientists and governmental officials worldwide. The changes in temperature result mostly from the effect of increased concentrations of greenhouse gasses in the atmosphere.


(3) Who do you think is the most glamorous person? A biotechnologist who led his company in international research, an ordinary welder who gained international fame through his work, or a photographer complimented widely for a series of photos?


(4) The problem begins with the alphabet itself. Building a spelling system for English using letters that come from Latin – despite the two languages not sharing exactly the same set of sounds – is like building a playroom using an IKEA office set.


(5) Most peasants remained self-sufficient and skeptical about money - and with good reason: the triumph of capitalism probably made them worse off. They now had to deal with a centralized imperial state that was collecting tax more efficiently, giving more power to landlords, and slowly reducing customary peasant rights to land and produce.


(6) Another method governments use to try and influence the private sector is economic planning . For a long time now, socialist and communist states have used planning as an alternative to the price mechanism, organizing production and distributing their resources according to social and strategic needs, rather than based on purely economic considerations.

(7) In the second quarter of the 19th century, a rapidly growing middle class created a great demand for furniture production. Yet at this stage, while machines were used for certain jobs, such as carved decoration, there was no real mass production. The extra demand was met by numerous woodworkers. Mass production came later and the quality of domestic furniture declined.


(8) In the Middle Ages, the design and use of flags were considered a means of identifying social status. Flags were, therefore, the symbols not of nations, but of the nobility. The design of each flag resembled the “devices” on the noble’s Coat of Arms, and the size of the flag was an indication of how high the owner stood in the nobility.


(9) The climate for doing business improved in Egypt more than in any other country last year , according to a global study that revealed a wave of company-oriented reforms across the Middle East . The World Bank rankings , which look at business regulations , also showed that The pace of business reforms in Eastern Europe was overtaking East Asia .