스피킹 평가좀 부탁드리겠습니다.

안녕하세요. 스피킹 50점을 갈망하는 PTE 응시자입니다.

혼자 제대로 하고 있는지 잘 몰라서 고수님들의 평가 부탁드립니다 ㅠㅠ

스피킹 30~40점대 늪에서 빠져나오질 못하고 있습니다. 시험장에서 실수를 꽤 한것도 있는데 나름 열심히 했었거든요 ㅠㅠ

아무튼... 올리려고 녹음하니 떨려서 약간....버벅댄거같아요 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ

RA 2개랑 DI 1개 시간재서 올린 파일입니다. 어떤 조언이든 달게 받겠습니다~~!!

플루언시만 살려서 올려둔거랑 인토네이션 평소에 넣는대로 하는거랑 두개 올려두었습니다.. 뭐가 더 점수받기 수월할까요 ㅠ 

1)

The Grand Canyon is 277 miles long, up to 18 miles wide and attains a depth of over a mile. While the specific geologic processes and timing that formed the Grand Canyon are the subject of debate by geologists, recent evidence suggests the Colorado River established its course thorough the canyon at least 17 million years ago.

2) 

 Augustus was given the powers of an absolute monarch, but he presented himself as the preserver of republican traditions. He treated the Senate, or state council, with great respect, and was made Consul year after year. He successfully reduced the political power of the army by retiring many soldiers, but giving them land or money to keep their loyalty.

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