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Speaking이 발목을 잡고 있으며, 그 중 RA 는 가장 기본적이면서도 어려운것 같습니다. 

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아래 두 문제를 녹음을 해 보았는데 speaking +65을 해내기 위해서 어떤 부분을 높혀야 할까요?


A spectacular recent example of public art, Charles Ray's Boy with Frog, is an eight-foot-tall sculpture installed on the tip of an island at the southern entrance of the Grand Canal in Venice. Designed for that prominent site, the sculpture displays the artist's characteristic combination of conceptualism and humor.


The fortunes and misfortunes of contemporary artists take shape, to a large degree, within the sphere of the commercial galleries that present new art. Reputations are built by the support of prominent gallery dealers and the approval of the critics, curators, and collectors who carefully monitor and judge the quality of the art featured in highly publicized exhibitions.





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