NATION PROHIBITION ACT 제가 짜짓기한건데요~~~
In 1920,the Volstead Act, prohibited the manufacture, sale, transportation, importation, exportation, delivery, or possession of intoxicating liquors for beverage purposes and nearly destroyed what had become a thriving national industry but One loophole in the Volstead Act allowed for the manufacture and sale of sacramental wines and It is banned the sale later.
BUT 이랑 AND 가 넣어서 한문장으로 만들었는데 저기에 콤마 넣어야 되는건가요??
어떤거는 콤마 넣고 어떤거 안넣고 하는것 같아서 이거 잘아시는 분 있나요? ㅎ
http://www2.ivcc.edu/rambo/eng1001/commas.htm
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5AaLBG134co
Rule 1 : Use a comma before any coordinating conjunction that links *two independent clause.
* FANBOYS
F - FOR
A - AND
N - NOR
B - BUT
O - OR
Y - YET
S - SO
For exmaple>
PTE is a tough English exam, and it is difficult to crack.
I went running, so I saw a duck.
I went running, and saw a duck. ( X )
I love watching movies, but I hate watching TV.
Black bears are beautiful, so they have shiny coats.
Rule 2 : Use a comma after a dependent clause that starts a sentence.
*Subordinate conjunctions: because, since, when, if, though, unless, until, where, while, which
For example>
Black bears are beautiful because they have shiny coats.
Because they have shiny coats, black bears are beautiful.
Rule 3: Use a comma when you are giving an extra information or an adjective clause.
Hari, who is wise man, cracked the PTE in the first attempt.
Rule 4: Use a comma to separate items in a series.
James Thomas finds inspiration in cooking, her family, and her dog.
Rule 5: Use a comma after introductory adverbs.
Finally, I cracked the PTE.
Unsurprisingly, I scored less in PTE when I got distracted by others in the exam hall.
The rule for where the comma goes, however, depends on where attribution comes.
Rule 6: Use a comma when attributing quotes.
The Thomas said, "I saw a snake." "I saw a snake," "I saw a snake". (X)
Rule 7: Use a comma to separate the elements in a full date.
Sunday, June 20, 2015, was a strange day.
Sunday, June 20, was a strange day.
June 2015 was a strange day.
Rule 8: Use a comma to separate each element in an address.
I work at HewlettPackard, suvery #192, whitefield main road, Bangalore, 560048.
Rule 9: Use a comma between two coordinate adjectives that modify the same noun.
I saw the big, mean duck when I went running.
Coordinate adjectives: reverse the adjectives and they still mean the same.
I lay under the powerful summer sun -- no comma
I lay under the summer powerful sun -- no comma
Rule 10: Use a comma to offset negation in a sentence.
It was the PTE exam, not a kindergarten exam, that I appeared day before.
덕분에 저도 잘 배워갑니다. :)
진짜 공부 열심히 하신것 같아요.
저는 공부는 하고 있는데 첫시험 결과가 아직 안나와서 마음이 뒤숭숭하네요. T_T