많은분들께서 에세이 템플릿을 여쭤보셔서 공유해봅니다. (총 240 words)
Cause & Solution 같은경우 각자 입맛에 맞게 바꾸시거나 시험당시에 조금 수정하시면 될것같습니다.
미리 말씀드리자면 이 템플릿은 그냥 빈칸채우기가 아닌 00 안에 단어보다 phrase나 문장을 넣고
총 글자수를 280 - 300 사이에 맞추는것이 목표입니다. 저같은경우 기계처럼 나오도록 외워서 시험당시에
템플릿쓰는데 8분정도 걸리고 나머지 시간동안 아이디어맞추고 총 2-3번정도 proof reading 가능하도록
연습했습니다. 아이디어 끼워넣는법은 굳이 설명 안해드려도 하시다보면 익숙해지실거라 믿습니다~
With the rise of urbanisation and technology development across the world, 00 has become the subject of heated debate. While it is possible to claim that 00 provides various benefits such as 00, others maintain that the substantial side effects of 00spark off the controversy over the potential impacts of this trend on disadvantages over the past years. In this essay, I shall elaborate on my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument with my experience before deducing a proper conclusion.
First, it is generally acknowledged that 00 provides a number of merits. For example, 00 has comprehensively contributed to the advancement of the subject such as culture and a human lifestyle in many ways. It can also be argued that 00 is beneficial for young generation as well as adults who 00.
On the other hand, those who argued for 00 have a different perspective and demonstrate convincingly that it can actually have a negative impact on 00. Moreover, there are multifarious concerns such as 00and those can be a significant factor to be considered.
To sum up, considering what has been discussed above, it is my opinion that far-reaching positive effects which have brought to the society far outweigh the negative effects. Therefore, I strongly recommend that to keep this trend for the future although it will undoubtedly be associated with negative consequences, societies should take conscious steps to mitigate these potential problems.