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1. The Story of Columbus
When Christopher Columbus arrived at Hispaniola during
his first transatlantic voyage in the year A.D. 1492, the island had already
been settled by Native Americans for about 5,000 years. The occupants in
Columbus’s time were a group of Arawak Indians called Tainos who lived by
farming, were organized into five chiefdoms, and numbered around half a million
(the estimates range from 100,000 to 2,000,000). Columbus initially found them
peaceful and friendly, until he and his Spaniards began mistreating them.
Unfortunately for the Tainos, they had gold, which the
Spanish coveted but didn’t want to go to the work of mining themselves. Hence
the conquerors divided up the island and its Indian population among individual
Spaniards, who put the Indians to work as virtual slaves, accidentally infected
them with Eurasian diseases, and murdered them. By the year 1519, 27 years
after Columbus’s arrival, that original population of half a million had been
reduced to about 11,000, most of whom died that year of smallpox to bring the
population down to 3,000.
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When Columbus arrived in island which was already settled by numbered half a million Indians called Tainos, after 27years, the population of Tainos had been decreased significantly due to infected particular diseases by mining gold as slaves.
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저는 이렇게 했는데요,Hispaniola 이 섬이름이 명시가 되어야 할거같아요, particular diseases 보다는 Eurasian diseaeses, small pox 이렇게 확실히 적어주시는게 더 좋을것같아요.
After 27 years 다음에 언제 시점인지도 나와야할거같아요 since Columbus arrived the island 라던가 아니면
이 글에서 키워드는 Christoper Columbus, Hispaniola, Native Americans, Taino, Arawak Indians, Spaniards, gold, mining, conqueorors, virtual slaves, Eurasian diseases, small pox. 정도로 보이는데요 이것들을 대부분 명시해주어야 더 확실한 요약이 되는것같아요.
하지만....저도 뭐 이렇게 말할처지는 못됩니다...ㅠㅜ