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1 asfafqwfqf 3 3,171 2017.11.09 09:58

As developing technology / In the modern society / In the globalization, It is a popular phenomenon that TOPIC.

Although TOPIC affords some advantages / brings hindrances such as A and B, I strongly believe that the drawback/ advantage of TOPIC

surpass the advantage/disadvantage. In this essay, I will elabolate negative effects/ positive effects of TOPIC with my experiences.

 

It is possible that TOPIC might v from n with n.

However, the side effects/advantages may outweigh the benefits/drawbacks.

In more detail, it is widespread issue that TOPIC (s+v), for example SV.

 

Moreover, TOPIC tend to v, 예시의 타이틀 is also a good example to show the issue, for instance, SV. As a result, SV.

 

From what has been discussed above, It is true that the disadvantage/advantages of TOPIC such as a and b and 나의 주장의 이유 overcome the advantages/disadvantages. Thus,  I seriously argue that TOPIC is (not) good for N, and we should put more effort to solve the problems for N.

 

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Comments

8 bruce 2017.11.09 12:41
전혀상관없음요
20 Jaylee 2017.11.09 15:13
bruce님 말씀처럼 전혀 상관없어요. 굳이 PTE에세이를 다시 준비할 필요없어요.
19 초절정간지녀 2017.11.09 20:09
저도 진짜 Eassy 그지같이 쓰고 글자수만 채웠는데 55점 나왔더라고요. ^^
근데 이게 System Error가 있는것 같아서 정상인지 모르겠어요.