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This table graph shows information about increase in the number of dwellings over past 10 years. the data has been collected from many different categories including region, dwelling stock year, increase the number, percentage increase. According to the table chart, the region in Sydney city the figure was 45,040 in 1994. overall, this graph is accurate and concise which can be used as a reference for future study with the same objective. 라고 했을거같네요 저였다면... This table graph shows information about increase in the number of dwellings over past 10 years. the data has been collected from many different categories including region, dwelling stock year, increase the number, percentage increase. According to the table chart, the region in Sydney city the figure was 45,040 in 1994. overall, this graph is accurate and concise which can be used as a reference for future study with the same objective. 라고 했을거같네요 저였다면...

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This given TABLE represents the information OF INCREASE IN THE NUMBER OF DWELLINGS OVER PAST 10 YEARS IN SYDNEY.
I can clearly see it from this given TABLE. there ARE TWO different sections which are including YEAR 1994 and YEAR 2004
The most significant feature of this image is that the highest figure is YEAR 2004 with about 77,000, which was followed by 2nd value. on the other hand, the smallest value is YEAR 1994 WITH 45,000.

근데 템플렛 자체에 IN CONCLUSION,......THERE ARE SIGNIFICANT CHANGES WITHIN 10 YEARS AND THIS INFORMATION WILL BE USEFUL FOR REAL ESTATE AGENT OR POTENTIAL FIRST HOME BUYERS. 정도 추가해 주면 좋을거 같아요.

템플렛 자체가 잘 정리된 느낌이 없습니다. 지금이라도 자료실에서 결론까지 잘 되어있는 템플렛 찾으셔서 준비하시는게 좋을거 같습니다. 본인이 익숙하신 템플렛에 적용하자면...(대문자 부분) This given TABLE represents the information OF INCREASE IN THE NUMBER OF DWELLINGS OVER PAST 10 YEARS IN SYDNEY. I can clearly see it from this given TABLE. there ARE TWO different sections which are including YEAR 1994 and YEAR 2004 The most significant feature of this image is that the highest figure is YEAR 2004 with about 77,000, which was followed by 2nd value. on the other hand, the smallest value is YEAR 1994 WITH 45,000. 근데 템플렛 자체에 IN CONCLUSION,......THERE ARE SIGNIFICANT CHANGES WITHIN 10 YEARS AND THIS INFORMATION WILL BE USEFUL FOR REAL ESTATE AGENT OR POTENTIAL FIRST HOME BUYERS. 정도 추가해 주면 좋을거 같아요. 템플렛 자체가 잘 정리된 느낌이 없습니다. 지금이라도 자료실에서 결론까지 잘 되어있는 템플렛 찾으셔서 준비하시는게 좋을거 같습니다.

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