[50점목표]RD 발음평가좀 부탁드립니다

모의고사는 몇번 쳐보고 실제시험1번쳤는데
모의고사에서는발음이 10점-30점사이이고요 실제시험에서는 발음이 40점나왔습니다
발음인식사이트키고 연습하면 발음인식에 기복이 너무커서 불안해서 평가차 글을씁니다
문제점좀 지적좀해주세요.
오버도해보고 완전 모노톤으로 강세도 최대한 없애고 말을해도 발음인식 기복이 너무크네요.
들어보시고 솔직한 의견과 개선점 부탁드려요






1.When they examined the brain of someone who understood many languages, scientists found that the area that governed speech did not have the same form as in most monolingual learning changes the brain or whether some people are born with this quality.

2.The castle is a masterpiece of wooden construction, the finest surviving example of Japanese castle architecture from this era, and preserves all its significant features intact. It is part of the network of such fortresses that were created all over Japan to ensure the country's continued unification.

3.People undertake a range of recreational activities during their time in Antarctica. Each station has a library as well as DVD players and a range of movies which are updated each year. Stations have a small spa and sauna, a gymnasium as well as billiards, table tennis, volleyball, board games, darts and some communal band and stage equipment.